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Z is for ZOMG! The A to Z Challenge is Ending

In honor of young adults everywhere (including those adults who are young at heart), Z is for ZOMG!

My first A to Z Challenge has come to an end, with the last day of April and the last letter of the alphabet.

Overall I’m glad I participated. I hope this exercise will help me blog more frequently–if I can blog every day, surely I can blog twice a week. My pub sister Nicki Elson is the one who encouraged me to give the Challenge a try, and it’s great she introduced me to this universe.

The best part of the challenge was meeting new bloggers! Here are some of the noteworthy writers and bloggers I came across:

*Roland Yeomans at Writing in the Crosshairs blog: His dead and undead characters in New Orleans have been interesting to follow!

*Kyra Lennon at Write Here Write Now blog: She just finished her sports romance (I love this genre) and it was great to hear from the various characters on a professional soccer team

*Heather Gardner at The Waiting is the Hardest Part blog: The adventures of the gnome Stormy kept me giggling throughout the challenge.

Thank you to the organizers of the challenge, including authors Karen Jones Gowan and Alex J Cavanaugh! Alex and Nicki are part of the Insecure Writers Support Group and I want to join that group once I finish my upcoming blog tour.

If I participate next year, I hope to write some posts in advance and visit more blogs. I think a theme might be too constraining but it’s interesting to consider. Have a great week, everyone!

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Y is for Young Adult

In the midst of writing adult romantic suspense books (The Conduct Series), I decided to publish a Young Adult novel I’d written back in 2007: Streamline.

It’s been interesting to cross genres so far, and I have a feeling I’m in for quite an education with the upcoming blog tour for Streamline on May 7-12. About 40 YA bloggers will be reviewing my baby, eek!

This story isn’t your typical YA, for several reasons:

1) It’s 129,000 words, when most YA’s are about 80,000. (It started over 200K words(!), so my editor and I have done a LOT of chopping.)

2) It features many points of view beyond the hero (Leo) and heroine (Audrey), including parents, siblings, and coaches.

3) It’s a murder mystery that’s for older teens and adults due to mature themes of abuse, violence, and sexual situations.

4) There’s no love triangle.

Because of these anomalies, I’m nervous about the reception to the novel by passionate bloggers. I hope there’s room for my unique take on YA! Regardless, I’m sure this will be a learning experience that will help me become a better writer.

What’s your favorite genre to read? If you’re a writer, have you crossed genres?

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X is for X-Rated

Are you a fan of erotica? I’m a prude at heart, and I used to blush when reading any sex scene. But when I started reading and writing fan fiction, my reaction changed. Now I enjoy a well-written sex scene, and I’ve read quite a few stories with BDSM, male-male romance, and kink . . . nothing fazes me anymore. I do prefer more plot than sex in romance novels, but a well-crafted intimate scene that advances plot and characterization is wonderful.

At my book club last night (see the Book Club tab above to learn more about these lovely ladies) we not only discussed our chosen read for the month (see my review of the hilarious Domestic Violets HERE), but also the erotica Dom-sub sensation Fifty Shades of Grey.

I still haven’t read Fifty but I must see what it’s all about soon. My friend Sally wasn’t impressed by the writing but there’s definitely something in there that keeps you reading.

Sally shared one theory about our attraction to books like Twilight and Fifty: women want to be desired. Edward and Christian desire their objects of affection so much that they become possessive and stalkerish, and women are drawn to such adulation.

Do you enjoy erotica? Why do you think Fifty Shades of Grey is so popular?

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W is for Wenworth Miller

Have you heard of actor Wentworth Miller? He’s my favorite actor, and an inspiration for my writing. I loved him in the TV show Prison Break. He played the lead character Michael Scofield with intelligence, passion, suaveness, and just the right amount of vulnerability. I think he is so sexy!

Who’s your favorite actor or actress? How have they inspired you?

And now it’s time for the Author Blog Bounce! Check out instructions HERE.

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V is for Vixen

A character that fascinates me is the vixen. I’m referring to the slang definition of vixen–“a sexually provocative female”–not “a woman regarded as quarrelsome, shrewish, or malicious”.

My favorite TV vixen is Samantha Jones from Sex and the City.

Do you remember the melon episode? Kim Cattrall plays her brilliantly.



She cracks me up. Samantha is coy, intelligent, sexually adventurous, and disdainful of monogamy. She doesn’t want to marry and she sure as hell doesn’t want children.

My mother, who is in her seventies, claims that women like Samantha Jones don’t really exist…that women aren’t really sexual aggressors. I have to admit I don’t have any friends like Samantha, but I believe there are women out there who do crave sexin’ it up with multiple partners.

What do YOU think?

**Blogger help!** The past two scheduled posts have not published. Is that happening to anyone else? Any suggestions for how to fix it?

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U is for Unbroken

Here’s my review of my favorite read of 2011:

What a perfect title to describe the real-life hero of this novel, Louie Zamperini: UNBROKEN.

One tip for writers to evoke emotion in their stories is to put their characters through hell, and I’ve never witnessed such emotional torture of a character. I was on the verge of tears for most of the book and at one point sobbed, reading what Louie suffered. What makes this story even more emotionally compelling is that Louie isn’t a fictional character. He’s a real Olympic runner, Air Force veteran, and inspirational speaker, now age 94.

Laura Hillenbrand, author of Seabiscuit, did exhaustive research for this novel and I’m proud to say I attended the same liberal arts college as she did (Kenyon College). I loved learning about the early days of competitive running . . . the firm belief that no human could break the 4:00 mile barrier . . . archaic ideas that training hills would make a runner slower . . . the cruise ship completely hindering training and race preparation as the American athletes traveled to Berlin for the 1936 Olympics.

But what was most educational were there fascinating details of WWII. I had no idea that rescue flights for downed air crew over the Pacific were so unsuccessful. Rescue missions often caused even more deaths. Most WWII novels and movies cover the European theater, but The Bronze Horseman by Paullina Simons taught me about the events in Russia, and this novel Unbroken really educated me about Japan’s role in the Pacific.

My book club recently read Hotel on the Corner of Bitter and Sweet, which highlighted the unfair treatment of Japanese-Americans in the internment camps during WWII. Unbroken shows a very different side—the unimaginable cruelty of the Japanese toward their prisoners of war. I developed a thirst for vengeance reading what these poor POW’s suffered. But to seek vengeance or to view only one side is to miss the point of this novel and of Louie’s life entirely. Louie’s indomitable, forgiving spirit is truly a gift of God. His story is such a spiritual masterpiece that it absolutely confirms my faith in God. Gah, I’m welling up in tears again just writing this review!

It’s so rare to find a meaningful read like this one. I know Louie’s story will stay with me for some time.

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T is for Titanic

I had the pleasure of watching my favorite movie in 3D yesterday: TITANIC.

What an incredible love story! The romance has all the elements I find intriguing: a strong hero and heroine, sacrifice, drama and humor, star-crossed lovers facing all sorts of conflicts including different backgrounds and a meddling third party, but most of all…two people making each other better through their love.

And of course I loved Rose guessing Dr. Freud would have something to say about men being obsessed with size, and Mr. Ismay replying, “I haven’t heard of this Dr. Freud…is he a passenger?” Hee hee.

Have you ever referred to a movie in your writing? I’m about 2/5 done with On Best Behavior, the third novel in The Conduct Series (adult romantic suspense). I just had to mention Titanic leading up to a love scene between my hero and heroine, Grant and Sophie. Here’s an excerpt:

Grant locked the door behind him and strolled into the darkened apartment. He hesitated upon noticing Sophie crashed on the sofa. The glow of the television framed her body in muted blue light. Her head tilted back, resting on the cushion, and her long strawberry-blond hair draped in soft waves around her face. She’d propped up her feet on the coffee table.
Smiling, he crossed over to the sofa and sat next to her, studying her delicate features. She hadn’t removed her makeup, and he noticed smudged eye shadow above long eyelashes feathered shut. She looked so serene. He reveled in the quiet after spending the night in a loud bar, stressed from hitting each note while scanning the crowd for any sign of the Russians.
Glancing at the TV, Grant saw the menu screen for Titanic and surmised she must have fallen asleep watching the DVD. Apparently she’d muted the sound before drifting off—the remote rested on her upturned palm.
As he crept in to reach for the remote, his hand halted midair when he heard a faint moan erupt from her lips. “Ahhhhh…”
He looked up to see her mouth twitch into a small grin, which matched his own. He wished he could be in the dream with her—it seemed like a fantastic time. Gently sliding the remote from her grasp, she started to stir, and he was dismayed he’d interrupted her blissful sleep.
Sophie’s eyes fluttered open. She gave him a dreamy smile. “You’re home.”
“And you’re adorable.” Not taking his eyes off hers, Grant set the remote on the coffee table and nudged down for a kiss. He’d seen the open box of Girl Scout cookies on the table, and wasn’t surprised when she tasted like chocolate mint. Once their lips met, his time apart from her floated away. Each kiss was a reconnection…a homecoming.
Grant gave her some space and she performed a feline stretch, lifting her arms above her head and curling her toes. She yawned. Seeing the TV screen, she frowned. “Aw, I missed the end.”
He smirked. “I’ve got a secret for you, Sophie.” Leaning in, he planted soft kisses along the warmth of her jawline, then murmured in her ear, “The ship sinks.”
She giggled and elbowed him. “Way to spoil it for me.”
“Hardly. How many times have you seen Titanic?”
A blush warmed her face as she sat up. “About ten.”
“That’s thirty-five hours of your life you’re not getting back.”
She scowled. “Stop ragging on my favorite movie! You haven’t even seen it.”
“What’s the point? There’s no suspense there—we all know what’ll happen.”
“It’s not about the suspense. It’s about the romance.” She sighed, her hand fluttering to her heart. “Jack Dawson’s the most amazing character.”
His eyes narrowed. “So this is about Leonardo DiCaprio.”
“He certainly helps my enjoyment of the movie.” A devious smile played on her lips.
He pulled back with a scowl. “I bet you were dreaming about him.”
“What?”
“You were moaning in your sleep earlier. Sexy dream with Mr. Dawson?”
“I…I can’t remember?”
“Right.” He lunged forward, his long fingers snaking under her blouse to tickle her as he adopted a German accent. “You vill tell me your dream!”
She squealed, shirking away from his inciting fingers. “No!”
The tickling increased. When his roving hands made their way to her sensitive bottom, cascading giggles mixed in with her shrieks.
“Tell me, Sophie.”
She gasped for air. “I won’t confess.”
“Ve have vays of making you talk.”
She shivered from his waltzing fingers, and when he gave her a respite, she managed to break free and dart away into the bedroom.
He clicked off the TV and followed closely behind, teasing “As if I vill let you get away so easy.” He found her on the bed, lying on her back, panting, staring up at him with anticipation. 
Climbing onto the mattress, he snuggled in next to her, propping up his head with the heel of his right hand as his elbow rested near her ear. “Did you dream about Jack Dawson?” His left hand tickled her soft neck, eliciting her sharp intake of air.
“I’ll never tell.”
His hand snaked up behind her ear, gently lifting her head to bring her closer.
“Mmm,” she sighed, reaching up to cradle his face. “Lay your hands on me, Jack.”
He glowered.
“I mean, lay your hands on me, Grant.”
“That’s better.”
“Lay your hands on me, McSailor.”

           She didn’t need to tell him again.

What’s YOUR favorite movie? If you’re a writer, have you referred to the movie in your writing?

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S is for Streamline

I’m getting my post up a bit late today, plagued by a bad cold that has stolen my voice. It was interesting doing psychotherapy yesterday with my lame squeaky rasps! Hopefully I did some excellent listening.

Streamline is my third release, though it was the first novel I wrote. It involves competitive swimming–a sport dear to me. I started swimming year-round at age eight and continued through college. I still swim a couple of miles twice a week with friends.

How do you streamline in the pool? Align your body after the dive or push-off to “spear” through the water with minimal resistance. Here’s a beautiful streamline:

(And a beautiful body!) How do YOU streamline when you meet up with resistance in your life?

This young adult murder mystery just launched 3-27-12, and I’m looking forward to the Streamline blog tour May 7-12, hosted by Julie from A Tale of Many Reviews. Julie’s signed up about 40 Young Adult bloggers and we’ll offer a $25 gift card as the grand prize.

Early readers have told me Streamline is a page-turner, as evidenced by comments from two Goodreads readers this morning:

Hallie wrote:  On page 103. “This is not my cup of tea. Can’t remember why I got it, either. But stayed up too late last night reading it anyway, so draw your own conclusions…”

Victoria wrote: On page 103. “Swimming and navy. Two plot combinations I know a lot about. Can’t put it down.”

Ha ha ha! I love the varied reactions to the same novel. Swimming and the US Navy may not be everyone’s cup of tea, but I hope the story will captivate readers.

See you Monday when I plan to post about Titanic, my favorite movie. 

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R is for Recruit

I hope this A to Z Challenge ends soon because I’m running out of ideas!

Today’s letter “R” is for Recruit, or rather my short story Swim Recruit.

The NCAA allows five paid visits to universities as a prospective student-athlete, and I find the process rather fascinating. The university attempts to woo the recruit while the recruit attempts to show off her academic and athletic prowess.

A recruiting trip might be one of the first times away from home for the high school senior. Though I was a teetotaler throughout high school, I got drunk for the first time on my swimming recruiting visit to Yale. 😉

This short story was part of an anthology benefiting breast cancer research, but now it’s a sweet YA single available for free at Omnific Publishing or for $.99 on Amazon.

Not long after Abby Donahue’s family falls apart, she escapes on an airplane to Chicago for a recruiting trip. A talented high-school swimmer, Abby hopes to score both a college scholarship and some distance from her parents’ recent divorce. But is this university for her?

Her first encounter with freshman swimmer Reese McGowan makes her nervous. He’s a tall backstroker with a mess of blond hair, glittering aquamarine eyes, and a suspension from the team for badmouthing the school to another recruit. As Abby unravels the mystery underlying Reese’s disdain, she begins to unlock her own hidden emotions about her father. Together Abby and Reese battle bullies on the team and inner demons, learning that flipper feet and fighting for family can actually be a good thing.

Here’s another “R” for you–my review of Room by Emma Donoghue. Haunting story!

Thanks for stopping by.

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Q is for Quietly, Quickly, Quintessentially: Confessions of an Adverb Abuser

1) As I quietly tiptoe into today’s Challenge letter “Q” (quintessentially the most challenging letter of all), I quickly realize I’ll have to strike up some creativity!

or

2) As I tiptoe into today’s Challenge letter “Q” (the most challenging letter of all), I realize I’ll have to strike up some creativity!

Which style is better? I contend #2 is better for a concise, smooth read. There’s no need to use “quietly”–that’s the only way one can tiptoe. And the other q adverbs are superfluous.

But when I first started writing, my style was much closer to #1. I bled adverbs like a stuck pig (and I used a lot of clichés too, but that’s for another post.)

~The Adverb Abuser Support Group~

Jen: Hi, I’m Jen, and I’m an adverb abuser.

All: Hi, Jen!

Jen: It all started when I didn’t appreciate the intelligence of my readers. I mistakenly thought I had to spell out every action, every feeling.

All: What a mistake…

Want to join the support group? 😉